I think, your group advertisement is very cool. I can understand what you want to sell.The music very interesting, but your group voice is some loud, some low. Your picture look great! Your pronunciation easy to listen and understand. Your advertisement also not to much long. Furthermore, the opening of advertisement so loud. But that great! I never hear an advertisement that make by student great like that.
I think you avert is very good. Your podcast is very creative. You know how to choose correct vocab words. I think first part where you put effect it too loud. Maybe you should make it small little bit. If you do it it will be very great. You focus on your main point. I know what you selling. Your conclusion it too fast. The last sentence when you said last words. You just finish and your avert is stop maybe you should said said it slower. You said it very smooth and you keep the volume equal not too small not too loud. Nice transition. I think your music it make the avert better. Anyway, i think this is very good podcast Great job!!!
This is a very good podcast but some of the sounds don't match. You said smoothly and and I understood what are you trying to sell.The music is very good, too. So overall, based on my opinion, this is a good advertisement so keep up the good work. Th transition is OK.
I think, your group advertisement is very cool. I can understand what you want to sell.The music very interesting, but your group voice is some loud, some low. Your picture look great! Your pronunciation easy to listen and understand. Your advertisement also not to much long. Furthermore, the opening of advertisement so loud. But that great! I never hear an advertisement that make by student great like that.
ReplyDeleteI think you avert is very good. Your podcast is very creative. You know how to choose correct vocab words. I think first part where you put effect it too loud. Maybe you should make it small little bit. If you do it it will be very great. You focus on your main point. I know what you selling. Your conclusion it too fast. The last sentence when you said last words. You just finish and your avert is stop maybe you should said said it slower. You said it very smooth and you keep the volume equal not too small not too loud. Nice transition. I think your music it make the avert better. Anyway, i think this is very good podcast
ReplyDeleteGreat job!!!
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ReplyDeleteThis is a very good podcast but some of the sounds don't match. You said smoothly and and I understood what are you trying to sell.The music is very good, too. So overall, based on my opinion, this is a good advertisement so keep up the good work. Th transition is OK.
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